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For Santiago, we danced with toros and we gleefully played with fire. We fought for our turns with passion before the sparks expired. In each turn we spun our bodies like those bamboo wheels of fire. We set our souls aflame and burned down our desires.
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Aug 1, 2023
Aug 1, 2023 at 1:55 PM UTC
Turning Toros
Santiago set out to catch some fish, He sailed out further, then had his want And waited patiently with the prayer and wish With the remorseless lament. For awhile the boy, Malolin Joined this ole man, to learn fishing But the old man was, so dreary and weak Weak enough, to let go months resting. Manolin  was a a fair young kid, A kid of twelve or more Santiago was an old man, A man of eighty four! The boy got annoyed, And decided to leave Thinking the old man, Was disgruntled to perceive. But one fine day, when the sun smiled at this case The old man tried to set off his dismay He thought to go fishing & get his bait Like he did so happily, in his boyhood days! He set out, set again and caught some fish He sailed out further, and had his want. He saw a birdie, leading him to sea He caught more tuna,  and one bigger fish that fullfilled his want. He relished the tunas, the sea offered as  gift He loved how yummy, yummy it looked. But hardly noticed the deep line, the bigger fish had something big on it, that may further get him hooked. He used a small line, To snug a dolphin. That had in it two small fish They hid it it, Shining and smiling. He fought his need for sleep and fatigue, Of constantly keeping hold of line Before he saw the bigger  fish, Suddenly circling his boat's outline. He assumed the fish's weight to be twice of his boat He stabbed the fish with a masterstroke. He used his hope to the utmost Tied the fish to a side of his boat,somewhere thinking to take it to shore. He let the current have him whole, Fearing the sharks might sniff Sniff the blood off the big fish, In some hours or just a jiff. The first shark took the hefty bite, Before he got stabbed by Santiago's harpoon, The  second one took just a quarter bite, But before these two got dead soon, they took with em the half harpoon. The old man fashioned a yet new harpoon, Fixing the knife to an oak stick, He used it then for the sharks to come, But , oh! It split on a new shark's skull click. He fought, and fought, but oh, at last, The old man won, with the major loss He returned to the shore in moonlit night, & Found the fish just had a residual skeletal mass. He reached the shore, with tears of remorse Oh, how bravely did the old man fought! Though it was a ' Victorious loss' He thought while dragging the mast to shore while  Monolin  came running, discussing how he fought. The boy smiled at the bravery, the old man showed, He smiled at the old man like he saw a hero, He hugged him tight, &  smiled in delight And called Santiago,  'His  brave hero'! And so you see , this sad story Ends Santiago tried to help himself, But he needed the help of his Friend, To provide him with some worldly wealth.
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Aug 30, 2017
Aug 30, 2017 at 5:21 PM UTC
The Ballad Of An Old Man
Santiago set out to catch some fish, He sailed out further, then had his want And waited patiently with the prayer and wish With the remorseless lament. For awhile the boy, Malolin Joined this ole man, to learn fishing But the old man was, so dreary and weak Weak enough, to let go months resting. Manolin  was a a fair young kid, A kid of twelve or more Santiago was an old man, A man of eighty four! The boy got annoyed, And decided to leave Thinking the old man, Was disgruntled to perceive. But one fine day, when the sun smiled at this case The old man tried to set off his dismay He thought to go fishing & get his bait Like he did so happily, in his boyhood days! He set out, set again and caught some fish He sailed out further, and had his want. He saw a birdie, leading him to sea He caught more tuna,  and one bigger fish that fullfilled his want. He relished the tunas, the sea offered as  gift He loved how yummy, yummy it looked. But hardly noticed the deep line, the bigger fish had something big on it, that may further get him hooked. He used a small line, To snug a dolphin. That had in it two small fish They hid it it, Shining and smiling. He fought his need for sleep and fatigue, Of constantly keeping hold of line Before he saw the bigger  fish, Suddenly circling his boat's outline. He assumed the fish's weight to be twice of his boat He stabbed the fish with a masterstroke. He used his hope to the utmost Tied the fish to a side of his boat,somewhere thinking to take it to shore. He let the current have him whole, Fearing the sharks might sniff Sniff the blood off the big fish, In some hours or just a jiff. The first shark took the hefty bite, Before he got stabbed by Santiago's harpoon, The  second one took just a quarter bite, But before these two got dead soon, they took with em the half harpoon. The old man fashioned a yet new harpoon, Fixing the knife to an oak stick, He used it then for the sharks to come, But , oh! It split on a new shark's skull click. He fought, and fought, but oh, at last, The old man won, with the major loss He returned to the shore in moonlit night, & Found the fish just had a residual skeletal mass. He reached the shore, with tears of remorse Oh, how bravely did the old man fought! Though it was a ' Victorious loss' He thought while dragging the mast to shore while  Monolin  came running, discussing how he fought. The boy smiled at the bravery, the old man showed, He smiled at the old man like he saw a hero, He hugged him tight, &  smiled in delight And called Santiago,  'His  brave hero'! And so you see , this sad story Ends Santiago tried to help himself, But he needed the help of his Friend, To provide him with some worldly wealth.
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May the road rise up to meet you As you travel on THE WAY May the music in your heart Untangle the worries of your day May old dreams be tossed Upon that pyre of strife And personal manifestos of peace Ascend to take on life And when the night closes in Anxiety and bliss compete Remember growth is hard my friend Some truths come incomplete In the meantime: May you step easy o’er the rocks That appear on The Way to defy Keep in mind your destination To reach that far-rimmed sky
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Sep 16, 2016
Sep 16, 2016 at 7:56 AM UTC
Buen Camino My Friend: As You Travel the Road to Santiago
For my craving, satisfy me of this spicy, loathsome inclination of my restless soul. You, from the Caribbean Sea-- Santiago, let your ambrosia signifies of how your people colloquially refers you, as "Rock". Santiago, a refuge you were once for the Jews. As desirably firm as you are, abolish me of these crisp desires for they renders me with nothing, but mere pertubation. Oh Santiago, obscure me inside your dry rain - shadow areas, relatively. For a while, conceal me so I may somehow be healed of this tempestuous outburst. Sing me a lullaby, Santiago. With such unique culture of yours, infect me. To be vibrant, and to become Jamaican.
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Nov 2, 2015
Nov 2, 2015 at 2:39 AM UTC
Santiago
I’ve passed a little more than time While I wore my feet to naught A hundred lives have been and gone For what I’ve seen as sport We trace the steps of ages spent When men were more than fiction Simple lives and simpler minds And faith their true addiction I’m in a place where stories take The power of the cross And though the spires may steal my breath I never felt the loss For on The Way I took as mine A shell and wooden limb And parts of people, gifts so rich Made my treasures small and slim I’ve shared myself with men I’ve made But will never know from there I don’t feel sad because I knew It’s not the whom but where I’ll never find another day that feels the same as this The time I’ve spent with just the steps; a special kind of bliss When all there is to fill your head, the rhythm of the road Your wishes and your broken corpse make light your mind and load And now I will be much the same In the before, the now and then But there’s a trail within my eyes That leads me back again Each sunset and each moon reborn Is on its own Camino And every way will one day take Me back to Santiago
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Dec 14, 2014
Dec 14, 2014 at 4:18 PM UTC
El Camino