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why, God? can't you see the tears flowing like the Jordan from these eyes that You created? why? Adonai, why has this shame been cast upon me? in this village You placed me in, there are a hundred laughing children in the arms of every other woman. am i alone put aside? Lord, you know how much i love Your ways, kept and followed every command since i was a girl, let me love a child for a little while, let me suckle a son to my breast and i will give him back to You. Rapha, let this prayer fall like pure soundless snow from my lips look down upon Your servant, look down and remember her.
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 3:29 PM UTC
Hannah's Tears
why, God? can't you see the tears flowing like the Jordan from these eyes that You created? why? Adonai, why has this shame been cast upon me? in this village You placed me in, there are a hundred laughing children in the arms of every other woman. am i alone put aside? Lord, you know how much i love Your ways, kept and followed every command since i was a girl, let me love a child for a little while, let me suckle a son to my breast and i will give him back to You. Rapha, let this prayer fall like pure soundless snow from my lips look down upon Your servant, look down and remember her.
Inspired by 1 Samuel 1. Chapter 2 is called "Hannah's Prayer." Written January 2014
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 3:29 PM UTC
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