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in the quiet   between the metal madness of flesh being ripped from young bones   the watching and waiting   the stinging eyes the flaring nostrils filled with the sounds of ****** painted flesh   there is a cool liquid silence   that comes with the token tokes we take   as we pass the golden bowl   those times when we forget we could flick a switch and rock and roll rock and roll with psycho-delic cassettes, or   full metal jackets, though   neither allows us to see there are times of senseless silence   and lost lizards lounging on dew dappled leaves   in mornings after   the crushing steel   the fatal fingered agony we sewed and reaped, there is this quiet, this still green scent   the lizard and the fruit   the green promise of tomorrow that we may erase with our screaming toys and deadly ploys but only after we awake from this smoky drifting dream
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Mar 1, 2013
Mar 1, 2013 at 1:21 AM UTC
the scent of green papaya (on being ****** in Vietnam)
in the quiet   between the metal madness of flesh being ripped from young bones   the watching and waiting   the stinging eyes the flaring nostrils filled with the sounds of ****** painted flesh   there is a cool liquid silence   that comes with the token tokes we take   as we pass the golden bowl   those times when we forget we could flick a switch and rock and roll rock and roll with psycho-delic cassettes, or   full metal jackets, though   neither allows us to see there are times of senseless silence   and lost lizards lounging on dew dappled leaves   in mornings after   the crushing steel   the fatal fingered agony we sewed and reaped, there is this quiet, this still green scent   the lizard and the fruit   the green promise of tomorrow that we may erase with our screaming toys and deadly ploys but only after we awake from this smoky drifting dream
I have not smoked marijuana in many years. Once, someone asked me to describe what it was like, and I replied, "Watch the movie, 'The Scent of Green Papaya'--it is like that." The movie takes place in Vietnam, though it is not about the war. Here, I tried to blend the silky images of that movie, being ****** and the experience of war.
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Mar 1, 2013
Mar 1, 2013 at 1:21 AM UTC
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