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Unlike Michelangelo, whose marble slab contains an entangled entirety of a crystalline vision of love,     life,         and loss, the desolation of souls,     the rending of divinity, the forlorn sacrifice, only seen by him until the sweaty glistening stone,      hewn and chiseled,           sculpted and slashed,   for tedious eons     painstakingly marked by time   and life force sacrificed, revealed its secret gift, I attempt to recreate the Pietà       by adding on material to the medium, rather than by carving it away.
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Oct 4, 2022
Oct 4, 2022 at 1:10 PM UTC
Carving It Away
Unlike Michelangelo, whose marble slab contains an entangled entirety of a crystalline vision of love,     life,         and loss, the desolation of souls,     the rending of divinity, the forlorn sacrifice, only seen by him until the sweaty glistening stone,      hewn and chiseled,           sculpted and slashed,   for tedious eons     painstakingly marked by time   and life force sacrificed, revealed its secret gift, I attempt to recreate the Pietà       by adding on material to the medium, rather than by carving it away.
Random poetry I felt like writing today. No rhymes this time.
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29/M/New York State
Oct 4, 2022
Oct 4, 2022 at 1:10 PM UTC
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