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Sometimes i Feel great Then create A fate I hate. Sometimes I Just debate And fixate On Being overweight. But then I Concentrate And reinstate A positive state Of feeling great!
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Nov 8, 2018
Nov 8, 2018 at 3:51 AM UTC
Sometimes I, But then.
Sometimes i Feel great Then create A fate I hate. Sometimes I Just debate And fixate On Being overweight. But then I Concentrate And reinstate A positive state Of feeling great!
A simple, yet fun exercise in word play. Using the last word to create the rhyme and follow through a single statement using a rhythmic meter that works best spoken aloud
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31/M/Ireland
Nov 8, 2018
Nov 8, 2018 at 3:51 AM UTC
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