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I wish to never know a touch that isn’t yours, or a presence not shaped by God for me. May the warmth of your breath tracing the back of my neck haunt me all my days. And in that longing, let me kneel in the softness of devotion. Let me wash your feet and quiet the storms inside you. May you find safety in the home we build together. And from that safety, let our eyes meet in eternity. Let your lips crave only mine. Then commit your body and soul to mine. Let us be undone, lost in the bliss we’ve vowed to share. Even in bliss, I pray that distance never finds us, and shadows never plague us. For God knows my heart will always be yours. So if I surrender to love, I surrender wholly to the touch that steadies me. I kneel in spirit before the one my soul calls home.
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Nov 21, 2025
Nov 21, 2025 at 2:40 PM UTC
Surrender
I wish to never know a touch that isn’t yours, or a presence not shaped by God for me. May the warmth of your breath tracing the back of my neck haunt me all my days. And in that longing, let me kneel in the softness of devotion. Let me wash your feet and quiet the storms inside you. May you find safety in the home we build together. And from that safety, let our eyes meet in eternity. Let your lips crave only mine. Then commit your body and soul to mine. Let us be undone, lost in the bliss we’ve vowed to share. Even in bliss, I pray that distance never finds us, and shadows never plague us. For God knows my heart will always be yours. So if I surrender to love, I surrender wholly to the touch that steadies me. I kneel in spirit before the one my soul calls home.
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Nov 21, 2025
Nov 21, 2025 at 2:40 PM UTC
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