it sickens me;
the lack of correction
in grammar,
in punctuation,
in style,
and in titling.
it disgusts me;
the apathy
and support
that go along with
spilling any idea
out; vulnerability
shouldn't be praised,
as it should be sculpted
and shaped, communally.
Aug 23, 2013
Aug 23, 2013 at 5:05 PM UTC
it sickens me;
the lack of correction
in grammar,
in punctuation,
in style,
and in titling.
it disgusts me;
the apathy
and support
that go along with
spilling any idea
out; vulnerability
shouldn't be praised,
as it should be sculpted
and shaped, communally.
a sociopath's political piece
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