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we get it, poets. things are like other things. this is a familiar concept to us all so why do we speak in metaphor all the time? it is because when we tell you we feel like our insides are on fire, we feel as though we are a house that is burning down until all that remains is a fragile frame accompanied by a pile of ash, it is not a metaphor it's a simile, notice my use of like or as but it is not a metaphor when you stick a cigarette between your teeth you do not fail to light it the thing that does the killing will **** you and you will let it when you write down the exact amount of pills you took and the number of days you felt worthless tallied into your stretch marks there is no metaphor there my poetry isn't metaphor it is a direct reflection of honest to god feelings I have never written a poem not meant literally we get it, poets. things are like other things. but that is a simile. things are not other things. we do not speak in metaphor.
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Jun 17, 2015
Jun 17, 2015 at 4:41 AM UTC
it's a metaphor
we get it, poets. things are like other things. this is a familiar concept to us all so why do we speak in metaphor all the time? it is because when we tell you we feel like our insides are on fire, we feel as though we are a house that is burning down until all that remains is a fragile frame accompanied by a pile of ash, it is not a metaphor it's a simile, notice my use of like or as but it is not a metaphor when you stick a cigarette between your teeth you do not fail to light it the thing that does the killing will **** you and you will let it when you write down the exact amount of pills you took and the number of days you felt worthless tallied into your stretch marks there is no metaphor there my poetry isn't metaphor it is a direct reflection of honest to god feelings I have never written a poem not meant literally we get it, poets. things are like other things. but that is a simile. things are not other things. we do not speak in metaphor.
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Jun 17, 2015
Jun 17, 2015 at 4:41 AM UTC
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