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sitting on top of the world literally and figuratively looking over a valley so gorgeous i wasn't even sure it was real sitting next to a girl i barely knew whose smile warmed the chilled air around us i watched the rolling fog form and disband shapes taking my thoughts with it a moment so pure it will stay frozen in time not even the rolling fog could sweep away the memory of a simple, silent moment spent with the beautiful girl that i barely knew
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Aug 30, 2015
Aug 30, 2015 at 7:28 PM UTC
rolling fog
sitting on top of the world literally and figuratively looking over a valley so gorgeous i wasn't even sure it was real sitting next to a girl i barely knew whose smile warmed the chilled air around us i watched the rolling fog form and disband shapes taking my thoughts with it a moment so pure it will stay frozen in time not even the rolling fog could sweep away the memory of a simple, silent moment spent with the beautiful girl that i barely knew
Written 8/28/15 on a backpacking trip to Mt. Townsend in Washington after watching the fog roll through a valley.
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Aug 30, 2015
Aug 30, 2015 at 7:28 PM UTC
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