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'estimate: 443.000 people die prematurely from tobacco abuse' i read from the crumpled cardboard box which holds the rest of the deadly weapons i often oscillate with ***** grey ashes flutter around, smoke in the atmosphere fades into the fumes of cars, my eyes water is it because of fog or cries? i take a deep, long drag; my mouth utters an inaudible chuckle, tears burn my cheeks, i mumble shrieks. sadness overflows my surroundings, everything turns blue, streetlights, billboards, faces; rain floods my shoes. wrenched in cold and shivering, i wonder, how many whom are stuck with the repulsive vice deeply desire to die prematurely because of some gloomy eyes.
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Jul 3, 2015
Jul 3, 2015 at 1:08 AM UTC
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'estimate: 443.000 people die prematurely from tobacco abuse' i read from the crumpled cardboard box which holds the rest of the deadly weapons i often oscillate with ***** grey ashes flutter around, smoke in the atmosphere fades into the fumes of cars, my eyes water is it because of fog or cries? i take a deep, long drag; my mouth utters an inaudible chuckle, tears burn my cheeks, i mumble shrieks. sadness overflows my surroundings, everything turns blue, streetlights, billboards, faces; rain floods my shoes. wrenched in cold and shivering, i wonder, how many whom are stuck with the repulsive vice deeply desire to die prematurely because of some gloomy eyes.
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Jul 3, 2015
Jul 3, 2015 at 1:08 AM UTC
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