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There is too much commotion And the mind feels violated Consciousness is hijacked With stark reality being fed Every waking hour The mental borders struck down By the brute forces Driving it towards insanity Derision of the thoughts It’s totally exposed to abuse Now, only rely on subconscious To draw a mental map Of the escape route Towards the path of silence Away from the commotion And find sanity again
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Nov 19, 2014
Nov 19, 2014 at 7:33 AM UTC
In the Commotion
There is too much commotion And the mind feels violated Consciousness is hijacked With stark reality being fed Every waking hour The mental borders struck down By the brute forces Driving it towards insanity Derision of the thoughts It’s totally exposed to abuse Now, only rely on subconscious To draw a mental map Of the escape route Towards the path of silence Away from the commotion And find sanity again
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Nov 19, 2014
Nov 19, 2014 at 7:33 AM UTC
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