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After Aodhan King and Joel Davies' Sinking Deep Rising tide washes over as the current pulls you deeper toward the disarray of the trench’s bottom where they lie—- the wreckage of vessels and barges. Fleets of battleships. And the sea monsters that reside just lurking around the corner. The sweet taste of air— already forgotten as the sea water floods inside, filling every fissure, saturating everything. You watch the current take away pieces of you—- parts you thought you cannot live without. You finally decided to let go. You are drowning. No— You are being cleansed.
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Jun 21, 2016
Jun 21, 2016 at 1:59 AM UTC
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After Aodhan King and Joel Davies' Sinking Deep Rising tide washes over as the current pulls you deeper toward the disarray of the trench’s bottom where they lie—- the wreckage of vessels and barges. Fleets of battleships. And the sea monsters that reside just lurking around the corner. The sweet taste of air— already forgotten as the sea water floods inside, filling every fissure, saturating everything. You watch the current take away pieces of you—- parts you thought you cannot live without. You finally decided to let go. You are drowning. No— You are being cleansed.
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Jun 21, 2016
Jun 21, 2016 at 1:59 AM UTC
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