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Every time I look at you, It’s like seeing you, For the first time again. A soul so kind, so pure. Like the spring of kindness, A fountain of joy. Your eyes shine like a starry night, Each star as beautiful as you, Quietly glowing If I could save time in a bottle, I would save our little chats, Just to spend more time with you. Watching the light in your eyes, Hearing the warmth in your voice, Feeling the glow of your smile When the sun comes up, It’ll remind me of you. When the sun comes down, I’ll be smiling for you. No I don’t deserve to, Be loved by a soul so pure, In the mess of the world, We’ve found peace, Thank you.
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Feb 14
Feb 14, 2026 at 5:58 PM UTC
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Every time I look at you, It’s like seeing you, For the first time again. A soul so kind, so pure. Like the spring of kindness, A fountain of joy. Your eyes shine like a starry night, Each star as beautiful as you, Quietly glowing If I could save time in a bottle, I would save our little chats, Just to spend more time with you. Watching the light in your eyes, Hearing the warmth in your voice, Feeling the glow of your smile When the sun comes up, It’ll remind me of you. When the sun comes down, I’ll be smiling for you. No I don’t deserve to, Be loved by a soul so pure, In the mess of the world, We’ve found peace, Thank you.
Hey wrote this poem for my girlfriend but would like to refine it with the help of your feedback.
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Feb 14
Feb 14, 2026 at 5:58 PM UTC
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