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Ordinary Love by Michael R. Burch Indescribable—our love—and still we say with eyes averted, turning out the light, “I love you,” in the ordinary way and tug the coverlet where once we lay, all suntanned limbs entangled, shivering, white ... indescribably in love. Or so we say. Your hair’s blonde thicket’s thinned and tangle-gray; you turn your back; you murmur to the night, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Beneath the sheets our hands and feet would stray ... to warm ourselves. We do not touch, despite a love so indescribable. We say we’re older now, that “love” has had its day. But that which love once countenanced, delight, still makes you indescribable. I say, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Published by The Lyric, Romantics Quarterly, Mandrake Poetry Review, Carnelian, Poem Kingdom, Net Poetry and Art Competition, Famous Poets and Poems, FreeXpression, PW Review, Poetic Voices, Poetry Renewal, Poetry Life & Times; also winner of the 2001 Algernon Charles Swinburne Poetry Award Keywords/Tags: Villanelle, ordinary, commonplace, everyday, love, bed, sheets, warmth, comfort, delight, limbs, night, light, white, hair, back, hands, feet, romance, passion, desire, longing, *** intimacy
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Mar 16, 2020
Mar 16, 2020 at 5:39 AM UTC
Ordinary Love
Ordinary Love by Michael R. Burch Indescribable—our love—and still we say with eyes averted, turning out the light, “I love you,” in the ordinary way and tug the coverlet where once we lay, all suntanned limbs entangled, shivering, white ... indescribably in love. Or so we say. Your hair’s blonde thicket’s thinned and tangle-gray; you turn your back; you murmur to the night, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Beneath the sheets our hands and feet would stray ... to warm ourselves. We do not touch, despite a love so indescribable. We say we’re older now, that “love” has had its day. But that which love once countenanced, delight, still makes you indescribable. I say, “I love you,” in the ordinary way. Published by The Lyric, Romantics Quarterly, Mandrake Poetry Review, Carnelian, Poem Kingdom, Net Poetry and Art Competition, Famous Poets and Poems, FreeXpression, PW Review, Poetic Voices, Poetry Renewal, Poetry Life & Times; also winner of the 2001 Algernon Charles Swinburne Poetry Award Keywords/Tags: Villanelle, ordinary, commonplace, everyday, love, bed, sheets, warmth, comfort, delight, limbs, night, light, white, hair, back, hands, feet, romance, passion, desire, longing, *** intimacy
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michael-r-burch
62/M/Nashville, Tennessee
Mar 16, 2020
Mar 16, 2020 at 5:39 AM UTC
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