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There you stand Putrefying Clarifying Denying There you go Distantly Achingly Blatantly Can't you see I've fallen? Plunging Plummeting Ending No one hears me Silently Softly Regretfully I'm no longer in that body I'm no longer with that mind I'm no longer in that bed I'm now what you can't find Comatose Brain dead Comatose Tears shed Yet my spirit lingers Holding onto you My eyes, they stare ahead They only see right through Let me go Let the pulse fade Let me go from here The deal is made Comatose Dying You won't stop Trying
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Dec 31, 2013
Dec 31, 2013 at 5:26 PM UTC
Comatose
There you stand Putrefying Clarifying Denying There you go Distantly Achingly Blatantly Can't you see I've fallen? Plunging Plummeting Ending No one hears me Silently Softly Regretfully I'm no longer in that body I'm no longer with that mind I'm no longer in that bed I'm now what you can't find Comatose Brain dead Comatose Tears shed Yet my spirit lingers Holding onto you My eyes, they stare ahead They only see right through Let me go Let the pulse fade Let me go from here The deal is made Comatose Dying You won't stop Trying
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elizabeth-thorn
Dec 31, 2013
Dec 31, 2013 at 5:26 PM UTC
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