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Remember us? Remember then? Those days we were the best of friends Our hearts were close And our bond was strong But placement of my hope was wrong Remember us? Remember when? I thought our love would never end You took my heart Made me believe But now it's hard to even see Once you felt And once you cared What of the passion that we shared? That love is gone No you and me I think of you and I can't breathe I've lost a precious part of me Losing you has always been Among my greatest fears To have what you and I had then I yearn with every tear I miss the tie that we had then And think of what we could have been I love you now As I did then For you were my most cherished friend Now, as I try to get my head clear, I'm hopelessly wishing those days were still here Each thought of you is A brand new tear While I'm left alone wishing That you were still here
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Dec 21, 2014
Dec 21, 2014 at 8:08 PM UTC
Then
Remember us? Remember then? Those days we were the best of friends Our hearts were close And our bond was strong But placement of my hope was wrong Remember us? Remember when? I thought our love would never end You took my heart Made me believe But now it's hard to even see Once you felt And once you cared What of the passion that we shared? That love is gone No you and me I think of you and I can't breathe I've lost a precious part of me Losing you has always been Among my greatest fears To have what you and I had then I yearn with every tear I miss the tie that we had then And think of what we could have been I love you now As I did then For you were my most cherished friend Now, as I try to get my head clear, I'm hopelessly wishing those days were still here Each thought of you is A brand new tear While I'm left alone wishing That you were still here
|Written August 4th, 2011| "Then" is a rewrite of "Faded", based this time on a real and very personal experience. © 2017 A.D. Sifford. I'm okay with you sharing my poems, but I ask that you show courtesy. Please be honest about the authorship by attributing it to my name. Thank you, - Sifford
#love#friends#pain#time#friendship#relationship#memory
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Dec 21, 2014
Dec 21, 2014 at 8:08 PM UTC
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