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. do you feel it ?                                                  like an empty unhaunted room                           with the night fooled                                  it's curtains drawn ? like a forrest                                                                 extinguished of creature sound ?    do i feel like my child feels                                                      like when he is sad or neutral       or pondering the number of his age  (5) or figuring how to tell us he broke a thing  or to brag                                                           about his new favourite discovery ? do i feel as nature                                                           ( for surely that is unavoidable ) ? or like a forgotten astronaut                                                                               (later  to be noted in song) ?                                     whatever i feel                                                                             it's some kind of exploratory action that's always the way, isn't it ?                                                                           a 'goddy' thing i feel like i'd rather not feel                                             i know fear explored provides reward          but i habitually drivel information                         and check in   inflamed   on habit patterns
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Jul 17, 2025
Jul 17, 2025 at 8:48 PM UTC
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. do you feel it ?                                                  like an empty unhaunted room                           with the night fooled                                  it's curtains drawn ? like a forrest                                                                 extinguished of creature sound ?    do i feel like my child feels                                                      like when he is sad or neutral       or pondering the number of his age  (5) or figuring how to tell us he broke a thing  or to brag                                                           about his new favourite discovery ? do i feel as nature                                                           ( for surely that is unavoidable ) ? or like a forgotten astronaut                                                                               (later  to be noted in song) ?                                     whatever i feel                                                                             it's some kind of exploratory action that's always the way, isn't it ?                                                                           a 'goddy' thing i feel like i'd rather not feel                                             i know fear explored provides reward          but i habitually drivel information                         and check in   inflamed   on habit patterns
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Jul 17, 2025
Jul 17, 2025 at 8:48 PM UTC
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