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This morning I woke up feeling lonely. I don’t know why. I have people around me who love me and want to hold on to me and I onto them. I know… feelings like this and dreams fly and soon evaporate into the cloudy sky. But today some dark critter a residue of the night has hooked me and won’t let go it has reeled me in so here I am using these lines to cast my mind out into the choppy waters to see if I can connect with something swimming there that’ll make sense of this tenuous mess in which I wander and wallow. I don’t seem to find my self comfortable, wholly accepted and at home with the people and places I roam in this soaked and leaky vessel. I know it’s stupid to be out here floating when songs and words I’m often quoting drift inside my head planted there by many magnificent progenitors who earnestly bred a young man for whom they cared. But loneliness does that. It puts me where I know I shouldn’t be by all grateful accounts. I think to myself I wish so and so was here to talk but they’ve long gone and walked from me who has lived so long. So here I am alone casting out or in to find the answer, a home or a place of some special grace… while I sit here with these lines in this lonely state. Hello out there…?
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Mar 2, 2019
Mar 2, 2019 at 10:48 AM UTC
Hello out there...?
This morning I woke up feeling lonely. I don’t know why. I have people around me who love me and want to hold on to me and I onto them. I know… feelings like this and dreams fly and soon evaporate into the cloudy sky. But today some dark critter a residue of the night has hooked me and won’t let go it has reeled me in so here I am using these lines to cast my mind out into the choppy waters to see if I can connect with something swimming there that’ll make sense of this tenuous mess in which I wander and wallow. I don’t seem to find my self comfortable, wholly accepted and at home with the people and places I roam in this soaked and leaky vessel. I know it’s stupid to be out here floating when songs and words I’m often quoting drift inside my head planted there by many magnificent progenitors who earnestly bred a young man for whom they cared. But loneliness does that. It puts me where I know I shouldn’t be by all grateful accounts. I think to myself I wish so and so was here to talk but they’ve long gone and walked from me who has lived so long. So here I am alone casting out or in to find the answer, a home or a place of some special grace… while I sit here with these lines in this lonely state. Hello out there…?
glenn-currier
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Mar 2, 2019
Mar 2, 2019 at 10:48 AM UTC
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