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My mind is like a snowflake it started out innocent so pure and remarkably fragile to the touch but sure enough, this snowflake finally touched the ground normally a snowflake would melt but this was no ground, this was a cliff so icy and brutally cold, nearly unbearable the once snowflake, turned to solid ice overtime all the built up pressure on top of the now ice has finally been triggered whether it was too much pressure of the new snow, the rain, or perhaps even some slight wind an avalanche is now cascading down the mountainside the snow is constantly rolling down the steep slope nothing can stop this downward spiral until it hits the bottom then it finally hit oh so loud it was too
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Jul 5, 2017
Jul 5, 2017 at 3:58 AM UTC
snowflakes to avalanches
My mind is like a snowflake it started out innocent so pure and remarkably fragile to the touch but sure enough, this snowflake finally touched the ground normally a snowflake would melt but this was no ground, this was a cliff so icy and brutally cold, nearly unbearable the once snowflake, turned to solid ice overtime all the built up pressure on top of the now ice has finally been triggered whether it was too much pressure of the new snow, the rain, or perhaps even some slight wind an avalanche is now cascading down the mountainside the snow is constantly rolling down the steep slope nothing can stop this downward spiral until it hits the bottom then it finally hit oh so loud it was too
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Jul 5, 2017
Jul 5, 2017 at 3:58 AM UTC
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