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Fifteen and questioning everything, I said, I don't believe in you. If you are real...Touch me. Speak to me. Give me a vision. Is this not how it works? If I obey, will you not...Prosper me? Bless me? Make me known? I was confused. I misunderstood. If you are never to physically touch me, nor audibly speak, or ever give me a vision...You are the realest thing in this universe to me. Though scientism rule everything around me, my faith in you keeps me; poor but my soul prosperous, broken but blessed, and known by heaven. God, you are the realest!
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Jul 31, 2015
Jul 31, 2015 at 7:25 PM UTC
The Realest
Fifteen and questioning everything, I said, I don't believe in you. If you are real...Touch me. Speak to me. Give me a vision. Is this not how it works? If I obey, will you not...Prosper me? Bless me? Make me known? I was confused. I misunderstood. If you are never to physically touch me, nor audibly speak, or ever give me a vision...You are the realest thing in this universe to me. Though scientism rule everything around me, my faith in you keeps me; poor but my soul prosperous, broken but blessed, and known by heaven. God, you are the realest!
After I read that a once close friend converted to scientism from faith this came to my heart.
e-d-castaneda
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Jul 31, 2015
Jul 31, 2015 at 7:25 PM UTC
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