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lost kid in a city so unfamiliar no map, felt a life unfilial walks lonesome streets, stretched thin roams around, wondering dreams within astonished by the things he ponders amazed by flying rails and walkways he saw money exchanged for companionship and wonders— is everyone just as alone as he is? he thinks of tall buildings and money swirling layers of bureaucracy and numbing workings but the colorful streets are splashed with hopes and dreams of silenced peoples he wishes to educate, to raise kids but aims for money to support his own and pressure here builds like a box sealed— can he withstand it, or choke up, just to go home again to a city familiar to him.
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Jun 24, 2025
Jun 24, 2025 at 6:44 AM UTC
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lost kid in a city so unfamiliar no map, felt a life unfilial walks lonesome streets, stretched thin roams around, wondering dreams within astonished by the things he ponders amazed by flying rails and walkways he saw money exchanged for companionship and wonders— is everyone just as alone as he is? he thinks of tall buildings and money swirling layers of bureaucracy and numbing workings but the colorful streets are splashed with hopes and dreams of silenced peoples he wishes to educate, to raise kids but aims for money to support his own and pressure here builds like a box sealed— can he withstand it, or choke up, just to go home again to a city familiar to him.
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23/M/Bandung
Jun 24, 2025
Jun 24, 2025 at 6:44 AM UTC
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