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I walked through the front door Just got home The only thing on my mind is you As I start to feel sore You are at home feeling sick That takes away my ability to think Asking God to give me all your pain I’m certain I’m going insane The world seems like it is crashing Like an earthquake, my world is shaking I am trying to keep my calm But all my pieces begin to crumble down I am standing naked in shower The water is hot, but I feel cold Every minute passing by feels like an hour Prayers work when nothing does, I’ve been told I continue to choke on my own breath My phone rings and I get a text I see your name, feel a sense of relief You tell me you’re feeling better So now I can finally breathe I was standing naked in the shower The water was hot, yet I was cold Every minute passing by felt like an hour I’m guessing prayers do work, I’m sold
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Mar 28, 2016
Mar 28, 2016 at 10:02 PM UTC
So hot yet so cold
I walked through the front door Just got home The only thing on my mind is you As I start to feel sore You are at home feeling sick That takes away my ability to think Asking God to give me all your pain I’m certain I’m going insane The world seems like it is crashing Like an earthquake, my world is shaking I am trying to keep my calm But all my pieces begin to crumble down I am standing naked in shower The water is hot, but I feel cold Every minute passing by feels like an hour Prayers work when nothing does, I’ve been told I continue to choke on my own breath My phone rings and I get a text I see your name, feel a sense of relief You tell me you’re feeling better So now I can finally breathe I was standing naked in the shower The water was hot, yet I was cold Every minute passing by felt like an hour I’m guessing prayers do work, I’m sold
I wrote this when my loved one was feeling sick.
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Mar 28, 2016
Mar 28, 2016 at 10:02 PM UTC
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