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somewhere between the first date and the last date Joni Mitchell, she, me   encapsulates I'm remembering well, pounding the dashboard of a red Jag, laughable now, mocking this fool's need for a middle age conceit, his heart to restart, reactivate in enthusiastic lockstep with the voice of the Joni,  the blonde goddess of his youth, foot falling in love, with the accelerator, speeding along at a joyous sixty five, in places where the signs said, "thirty five to stay alive" this aged Rip Van Winkle teenager, in reverse osmosis of Big, an old buck, come back to antlered life, singing along to the CD disc set on backdate *I could drink case of you, and still be on my feet* and he could rediscovering the champagne taste of a great first date, feeling the heated blood and fevered mind, symptoms of the pleasures of a robust anticipate thinking she's the one who will make him great, happy greater, greater happy than that one ever, ever, he thought was roulette~wheel possible, landing on the red of hopeful for a floodgate overture spilling months, days, minute minute moments (tiny time intervals), of the fated faded last date later,  the next eve, next day or the next of never, comes the deflate but then, Joni singing comfort words, reminding him that he would be, wisely, sadly seeing, feeling, both sides now, and yet again, getting his mind back to straight *I've looked at love that way, but now it's just another show. you leave 'em laughing when you go, and if you care, don't let them know, don't give yourself away* a grown man punk'd, blasted, dumb and dumber, dumped, a feeling sorry sad sack self, until he himself reflates, drink another case, onto yet another magical mystery first date pounding that dashboard once again, believing it's not too late that perfect roommate heart's to find and captivate, to attain, invade, acquaint and laughingly... serenade
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Jul 5, 2016
Jul 5, 2016 at 8:38 PM UTC
A Case of You & Joni (first date/last date)
somewhere between the first date and the last date Joni Mitchell, she, me   encapsulates I'm remembering well, pounding the dashboard of a red Jag, laughable now, mocking this fool's need for a middle age conceit, his heart to restart, reactivate in enthusiastic lockstep with the voice of the Joni,  the blonde goddess of his youth, foot falling in love, with the accelerator, speeding along at a joyous sixty five, in places where the signs said, "thirty five to stay alive" this aged Rip Van Winkle teenager, in reverse osmosis of Big, an old buck, come back to antlered life, singing along to the CD disc set on backdate *I could drink case of you, and still be on my feet* and he could rediscovering the champagne taste of a great first date, feeling the heated blood and fevered mind, symptoms of the pleasures of a robust anticipate thinking she's the one who will make him great, happy greater, greater happy than that one ever, ever, he thought was roulette~wheel possible, landing on the red of hopeful for a floodgate overture spilling months, days, minute minute moments (tiny time intervals), of the fated faded last date later,  the next eve, next day or the next of never, comes the deflate but then, Joni singing comfort words, reminding him that he would be, wisely, sadly seeing, feeling, both sides now, and yet again, getting his mind back to straight *I've looked at love that way, but now it's just another show. you leave 'em laughing when you go, and if you care, don't let them know, don't give yourself away* a grown man punk'd, blasted, dumb and dumber, dumped, a feeling sorry sad sack self, until he himself reflates, drink another case, onto yet another magical mystery first date pounding that dashboard once again, believing it's not too late that perfect roommate heart's to find and captivate, to attain, invade, acquaint and laughingly... serenade
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Jul 5, 2016
Jul 5, 2016 at 8:38 PM UTC
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