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I feel I'm growing cold is this getting old? as the passions which I hold stow slowly into stone A crooked compromise watching the demise of love for younger times eroding quickly with the tides Holding to emotions I wish would still arise yet with every motion swallowed more within my mind Is this poem too simple? Does it have no depth? at least I carry words there is no peace in breath.
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Oct 8, 2019
Oct 8, 2019 at 11:30 PM UTC
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I feel I'm growing cold is this getting old? as the passions which I hold stow slowly into stone A crooked compromise watching the demise of love for younger times eroding quickly with the tides Holding to emotions I wish would still arise yet with every motion swallowed more within my mind Is this poem too simple? Does it have no depth? at least I carry words there is no peace in breath.
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Oct 8, 2019
Oct 8, 2019 at 11:30 PM UTC
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