i have a great thinking capacity
but my thoughts feel like a mystery
my dreams
are eating me
faster than chipped concrete
breaking me
emotionally;
mentally.
thoughts translate
into garbled words
that i cant really communicate
i try to emulate
desires that
seem unattainable
probably unbelievable
brain-eating nightmares
like electrical cords
shock me
like a thousand swords
i am disintegrating
my mind seems to be decaying
probably rotting
or maybe i had just been dreaming
(b.d.s.)
Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 10:05 PM UTC
i have a great thinking capacity
but my thoughts feel like a mystery
my dreams
are eating me
faster than chipped concrete
breaking me
emotionally;
mentally.
thoughts translate
into garbled words
that i cant really communicate
i try to emulate
desires that
seem unattainable
probably unbelievable
brain-eating nightmares
like electrical cords
shock me
like a thousand swords
i am disintegrating
my mind seems to be decaying
probably rotting
or maybe i had just been dreaming
(b.d.s.)
suggestions greatly needed! sorry i had been on a huge writer's block! trying to overcome it! :)
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