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The swaying leaves from a tree Remind me A bit of me, and a bit of you— Were blunt with your sadness Where I did not need A sight of you To know you’re in a hue of Dark Blue Barely standing, you were In shivers from a freezing cold The cold— A sharp hue of darkened gray Convinced you That there was no sunlight to step out into anyway Maybe, It was the faint scent of a sad rain Lingering over you A crisp scent— that clearly drew me into An all too familiar feeling.
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Feb 14, 2021
Feb 14, 2021 at 10:34 AM UTC
Faintly
The swaying leaves from a tree Remind me A bit of me, and a bit of you— Were blunt with your sadness Where I did not need A sight of you To know you’re in a hue of Dark Blue Barely standing, you were In shivers from a freezing cold The cold— A sharp hue of darkened gray Convinced you That there was no sunlight to step out into anyway Maybe, It was the faint scent of a sad rain Lingering over you A crisp scent— that clearly drew me into An all too familiar feeling.
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Feb 14, 2021
Feb 14, 2021 at 10:34 AM UTC
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