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*What feeds a writer’s art? Why feed a writer’s art - when the appetite’s clearly insatiable? I think in stiches, rows, paragraphs and stanzas, and I’m not one to undershoot a thesis. I can’t seem to just write a paper for school, I have to craft some kind of narrative - it’s practically involuntary.* Last week was ‘All Saints’ school break. It was a week in France that, like fall, shifted the temperature - cooling the pace, so Peter (my bf) and I could take a breath and metabolize the changes of the past few weeks, where we both moved to Paris - changing schools and jobs. We’ve had big feelings - it was a lot. Peter’s content with my tireless run on the hamster wheel of education - he has a PhD, so he understands the grind and my often prickly, acerbic and deeply abstracted school-day moods. He’s on a steep learning curve himself, these days, living suddenly in an all-French world, where every sign and menu is semi-unreadable. We’re working on it - we’ll get there because his tutor gives excellent rewards for effort. . . Songs for this: Take On Me by Josh Whitehouse Poor Boy - Nick Drake Window - Still Woozy
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Nov 3, 2025
Nov 3, 2025 at 12:52 PM UTC
deeply abstracted
*What feeds a writer’s art? Why feed a writer’s art - when the appetite’s clearly insatiable? I think in stiches, rows, paragraphs and stanzas, and I’m not one to undershoot a thesis. I can’t seem to just write a paper for school, I have to craft some kind of narrative - it’s practically involuntary.* Last week was ‘All Saints’ school break. It was a week in France that, like fall, shifted the temperature - cooling the pace, so Peter (my bf) and I could take a breath and metabolize the changes of the past few weeks, where we both moved to Paris - changing schools and jobs. We’ve had big feelings - it was a lot. Peter’s content with my tireless run on the hamster wheel of education - he has a PhD, so he understands the grind and my often prickly, acerbic and deeply abstracted school-day moods. He’s on a steep learning curve himself, these days, living suddenly in an all-French world, where every sign and menu is semi-unreadable. We’re working on it - we’ll get there because his tutor gives excellent rewards for effort. . . Songs for this: Take On Me by Josh Whitehouse Poor Boy - Nick Drake Window - Still Woozy
BLT Merriam Webster word of the day challenge 10/27/25: Acerbic = sharply sarcastic in temper, mood, or tone. *For instance , I’ll find myself trying to form a narrative, in response to a clinical case scenario, meant to demonstrate my diagnostic reasoning.
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Nov 3, 2025
Nov 3, 2025 at 12:52 PM UTC
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