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a place once filled with magical thrill has torn and spilled leaving only cold chill a thing once warm devoured by a merciless swarm drenched in oblivion's storm and accepted as the norm what more is left to take ? take take take give give give the pattern of things in life to live the way it should be yet it never quite ceases often time just displeases a flirt with the world, teases if one should ever feel like they were lacking i would advise them to perhaps sleep on it for a lifetime and maybe by the end they would wake up and find that everything they never wanted was nothing they ever needed
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Nov 1, 2011
Nov 1, 2011 at 5:00 AM UTC
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a place once filled with magical thrill has torn and spilled leaving only cold chill a thing once warm devoured by a merciless swarm drenched in oblivion's storm and accepted as the norm what more is left to take ? take take take give give give the pattern of things in life to live the way it should be yet it never quite ceases often time just displeases a flirt with the world, teases if one should ever feel like they were lacking i would advise them to perhaps sleep on it for a lifetime and maybe by the end they would wake up and find that everything they never wanted was nothing they ever needed
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Nov 1, 2011
Nov 1, 2011 at 5:00 AM UTC
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