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Tian is five Tian is lonely Tian has no friends She's locked in her room The clock is a close companion She watches it count down to noon With a piece of chocolate in her hand She stares at the red balloon. I'm seven now I 'm locked away My parents shame Their secret child I live alone in this room and I know no one But this balloon The red, round balloon That's lived for three days The red, round balloon I hope you stay I'll give you chocolate That's all I have My names Tian and I'm lost
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Mar 16, 2017
Mar 16, 2017 at 1:28 PM UTC
Tian
Tian is five Tian is lonely Tian has no friends She's locked in her room The clock is a close companion She watches it count down to noon With a piece of chocolate in her hand She stares at the red balloon. I'm seven now I 'm locked away My parents shame Their secret child I live alone in this room and I know no one But this balloon The red, round balloon That's lived for three days The red, round balloon I hope you stay I'll give you chocolate That's all I have My names Tian and I'm lost
the three random words are balloon, clock, and chocolate. Tian is the child that her parents never wanted. They were hoping for a boy, but got a girl. They locked her away as punishment, although she did nothing wrong. They show a little pity, and each year for her birthday they give her a balloon and chocolate. Tian is a very smart girl, and she knows why her parents do to her what they do. Should I make a second part to this?
KeeKee
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Mar 16, 2017
Mar 16, 2017 at 1:28 PM UTC
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