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On good days, you were tender to me Kissed and loved me with kindness Other not appealing moments You filled me emptiness and not worthy of your love You love me and I you Where did we fail? Was the lies too much Was the distance too far We started at our young adult life We ended at the prime of adult responsibly Did our love only work when we had no duties to fulfil? Was that love or pleasure seeking? I wanted you I needed you by myside I craved for the man you would become Was five year not long enough for me wait? Did my crying and rage for change not make you understand In my countless hours by your side tending to you not equal the favor in return I left I left you Now are just memories Moments that came and gone Next step? New love? Is that a real thing? Can I achieve that? Saddest thought.. Only time will tell Patience with myself Patience with my new partner
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Jul 2, 2017
Jul 2, 2017 at 3:39 AM UTC
In loving memory
On good days, you were tender to me Kissed and loved me with kindness Other not appealing moments You filled me emptiness and not worthy of your love You love me and I you Where did we fail? Was the lies too much Was the distance too far We started at our young adult life We ended at the prime of adult responsibly Did our love only work when we had no duties to fulfil? Was that love or pleasure seeking? I wanted you I needed you by myside I craved for the man you would become Was five year not long enough for me wait? Did my crying and rage for change not make you understand In my countless hours by your side tending to you not equal the favor in return I left I left you Now are just memories Moments that came and gone Next step? New love? Is that a real thing? Can I achieve that? Saddest thought.. Only time will tell Patience with myself Patience with my new partner
carisa-saenz
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carisa-saenz
30/F/Brazilian
Jul 2, 2017
Jul 2, 2017 at 3:39 AM UTC
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