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Submerged in water Gasping for air Blackness surrounds me My lungs feel tight My eyes fail me As do my limbs Struggling to find A way up Or out But I can't find The right direction The surface Any means of escape Thrashing Choking Suffering And the only way To save myself Is to let go And hope that the release Leads me to the surface And not to the depths Below
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Aug 27, 2013
Aug 27, 2013 at 10:25 AM UTC
Asphyxia
Submerged in water Gasping for air Blackness surrounds me My lungs feel tight My eyes fail me As do my limbs Struggling to find A way up Or out But I can't find The right direction The surface Any means of escape Thrashing Choking Suffering And the only way To save myself Is to let go And hope that the release Leads me to the surface And not to the depths Below
ivy-carter
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Aug 27, 2013
Aug 27, 2013 at 10:25 AM UTC
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