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What have we become, as the years have drawn on At the hands of ourselves and our fate Unmoving in the pillars we rested our lives upon What have we become Convincing ourselves we were but a moment too late Biding time ‘till we could fly on the wings of a swan As our minds rotted at an ever-quickening rate Dismissing our stumble as an unlikely phenomenon Our thundering heartbeats left to reverberate The mirage of our advance now shattered and gone What have we become
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Jun 3, 2021
Jun 3, 2021 at 12:01 PM UTC
Circular Motion- Roundel
What have we become, as the years have drawn on At the hands of ourselves and our fate Unmoving in the pillars we rested our lives upon What have we become Convincing ourselves we were but a moment too late Biding time ‘till we could fly on the wings of a swan As our minds rotted at an ever-quickening rate Dismissing our stumble as an unlikely phenomenon Our thundering heartbeats left to reverberate The mirage of our advance now shattered and gone What have we become
I tried to write something with a more defined structure, let me know if you have any suggestions. It's been a strange week with some mixed news, so I feel like I'm starting over again. I hope this poem got that message across, I hate it when structure comes at the expense of the meaning. Anyhow, hope everyone is doing well :)
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Jun 3, 2021
Jun 3, 2021 at 12:01 PM UTC
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