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5-7-5 Haiku version: Boku no haru, de tenki ha ii desu, hajimashou ka? (Eng: My summer Where the weather is good Let us finally begin?) 5-7-5-7-7 Tanka version: Boku no haru de tenki ha ii desu, hajimashou ka? Hana o sakimasu. Mitteru yo, hayaku! (My summer Where the weather is good Let us finally begin? The flowers bloom Come see this, quick!)
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Jul 28, 2019
Jul 28, 2019 at 10:45 PM UTC
My Summer Haiku (Haiku + Tanka)
5-7-5 Haiku version: Boku no haru, de tenki ha ii desu, hajimashou ka? (Eng: My summer Where the weather is good Let us finally begin?) 5-7-5-7-7 Tanka version: Boku no haru de tenki ha ii desu, hajimashou ka? Hana o sakimasu. Mitteru yo, hayaku! (My summer Where the weather is good Let us finally begin? The flowers bloom Come see this, quick!)
Haiku are poems with specific syllable rules (as said 5 syllables, then 7, then 5) Tanka are more recent and appearantly popular versions of Haiku where the original poem (5-7-5) gets an adaptation (7-7) usually you add this part yourself, but trends start where other poets add this adaptation. Want to give me your version on it?
Keiri
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24/F/Belgium
Jul 28, 2019
Jul 28, 2019 at 10:45 PM UTC
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