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1st persona Inequality is good, a wise friend once divulged It was a good thought that has a hint of truth Why? I asked to uncover its mystery The he replied and informed me gleefully 2nd persona Perfect liberation is too far to achieve for foolish men, In the present time I witness what I believe Blissful faces all around and its probable not their last And ain’t we living now in an unequal world with future to trust? 1st persona I ask, but what about those people lamenting in the dark? 2nd persona I’m sorry to tell you bro, in a senseless quest I won’t embark Isn’t it those happy people the cause of their misery? Which we are a part of, this is ours and that is their destiny Of course I won’t impede your stance in this matter I believe you ain’t too foolish with your freedom and liberty It’s just that some people get what they want on a silver platter While some work their ***** of just to receive their miniscule pay 1st persona I understand my friend that harsh verity 2nd persona Harsh? Yeah to some people it is full of cruelty That’s why they want to overturn the norms, the world’s ethos I admire their courage but that is a matter I don’t intend to poke my nose 1st persona Speaking of unfairness, I have a thought of mine Why do people complain of what is absent When compared to others they have a lot present Is it because man's greed knows no confines And some people grumble about their problems that   When compared to other's crosses are just shallow vats 2nd persona If it is what you said then what use is contentment? And the second problem’s just like a game in my discernment Level by level we are differing with every other It is by which our environments determine our given attitude A level one complains to a level seven, a higher number And a level ten complains to a problem of greater magnitude By which sometimes the level ten see level one in annoyance For how lucky he is yet grumble of his misfortune See, its just a matter of perspective and vision Now why are you looking at me in askance? 1st persona Your logic has something wrong, I’m just pointing out, not debate Why can’t a level ten, over a level 1 problem, grumble? For its just a matter of perspective as you did articulate And if it is the case then what use is the level of the people? 2nd persona Hahaha, you got me right my friend My view is flawed as I am Please do share thy thoughts so all this will end? For we have talked till the cows to home, come 1st persona My friend, I dare not belittle the view you conceive For I think it has a hint of truth, even though with a flaw You have a wisdom that exists only on a chosen few So let me add a bit of my subjective perspective The great may whine of a small barricade The lesser may smile to the towering obstacles ahead In every individual there are many factors of multitude This is what you have missed, the peculiarity of humans Not just discernment, There is also temperament We not only have perspective, There is also attitude that we give Many matter in life, I thus conclude my statement 2nd persona So that’s it! Thank you for the enlightenment Those factors really do affect our actions As long as we are humans, there are no exceptions To persist, to cower, to grumble, in traversing the rain To take it easy, to seek help or to accomplish it on our own Despite all these choices, one truth remains That in life we most likely will reap what we have sown
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Sep 16, 2018
Sep 16, 2018 at 4:45 AM UTC
“Unfairness”
1st persona Inequality is good, a wise friend once divulged It was a good thought that has a hint of truth Why? I asked to uncover its mystery The he replied and informed me gleefully 2nd persona Perfect liberation is too far to achieve for foolish men, In the present time I witness what I believe Blissful faces all around and its probable not their last And ain’t we living now in an unequal world with future to trust? 1st persona I ask, but what about those people lamenting in the dark? 2nd persona I’m sorry to tell you bro, in a senseless quest I won’t embark Isn’t it those happy people the cause of their misery? Which we are a part of, this is ours and that is their destiny Of course I won’t impede your stance in this matter I believe you ain’t too foolish with your freedom and liberty It’s just that some people get what they want on a silver platter While some work their ***** of just to receive their miniscule pay 1st persona I understand my friend that harsh verity 2nd persona Harsh? Yeah to some people it is full of cruelty That’s why they want to overturn the norms, the world’s ethos I admire their courage but that is a matter I don’t intend to poke my nose 1st persona Speaking of unfairness, I have a thought of mine Why do people complain of what is absent When compared to others they have a lot present Is it because man's greed knows no confines And some people grumble about their problems that   When compared to other's crosses are just shallow vats 2nd persona If it is what you said then what use is contentment? And the second problem’s just like a game in my discernment Level by level we are differing with every other It is by which our environments determine our given attitude A level one complains to a level seven, a higher number And a level ten complains to a problem of greater magnitude By which sometimes the level ten see level one in annoyance For how lucky he is yet grumble of his misfortune See, its just a matter of perspective and vision Now why are you looking at me in askance? 1st persona Your logic has something wrong, I’m just pointing out, not debate Why can’t a level ten, over a level 1 problem, grumble? For its just a matter of perspective as you did articulate And if it is the case then what use is the level of the people? 2nd persona Hahaha, you got me right my friend My view is flawed as I am Please do share thy thoughts so all this will end? For we have talked till the cows to home, come 1st persona My friend, I dare not belittle the view you conceive For I think it has a hint of truth, even though with a flaw You have a wisdom that exists only on a chosen few So let me add a bit of my subjective perspective The great may whine of a small barricade The lesser may smile to the towering obstacles ahead In every individual there are many factors of multitude This is what you have missed, the peculiarity of humans Not just discernment, There is also temperament We not only have perspective, There is also attitude that we give Many matter in life, I thus conclude my statement 2nd persona So that’s it! Thank you for the enlightenment Those factors really do affect our actions As long as we are humans, there are no exceptions To persist, to cower, to grumble, in traversing the rain To take it easy, to seek help or to accomplish it on our own Despite all these choices, one truth remains That in life we most likely will reap what we have sown
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23/M/Philippines
Sep 16, 2018
Sep 16, 2018 at 4:45 AM UTC
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