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we took turns toking, holding the tent pole up while the rain battered the canvas dawn crawled over the great rocks; a synovial silence after the storm still ****** we finally succumbed   to sleep, for an eternal minute   until awakened by Huns on horses, hoof beats ricocheting   off the hard stones, echoing in the canyons worse than that thunder, the eerie emanations riding the backs of the staccato waves from the beasts’ shod feet     words flung from the riders’ tongues slapping our ears, bedeviling our weary wits, these time traveling tricksters, transporting     us to a world at war Hueco Tanks, Texas, July, 1969
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Nov 18, 2016
Nov 18, 2016 at 9:47 PM UTC
dawn attack
we took turns toking, holding the tent pole up while the rain battered the canvas dawn crawled over the great rocks; a synovial silence after the storm still ****** we finally succumbed   to sleep, for an eternal minute   until awakened by Huns on horses, hoof beats ricocheting   off the hard stones, echoing in the canyons worse than that thunder, the eerie emanations riding the backs of the staccato waves from the beasts’ shod feet     words flung from the riders’ tongues slapping our ears, bedeviling our weary wits, these time traveling tricksters, transporting     us to a world at war Hueco Tanks, Texas, July, 1969
under the influence of cannabis Hueco Tanks, Texas, July, 1969, a true tale
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Nov 18, 2016
Nov 18, 2016 at 9:47 PM UTC
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