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i read a poem that made me question the things i've been calling poetry it made me feel that what i write simply isn't enough i could do better the poem was about a woman and i felt whole and the words weren't for me, about me, but i felt whole in ways i can't explain and i'll never be able to but i thought to myself that this is poetry and this is what words are supposed to do they're supposed to make you feel things regardless of what and i kept wondering if my words have that effect i want people to yern, long, hope, survive off my words, devour them and i want my words to leave them longing and hoping for just a bit more and i read this poem not once, not twice, but three times, eating up the words like they were the last meal on earth and i felt whole
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May 17, 2016
May 17, 2016 at 2:33 AM UTC
i read a poem
i read a poem that made me question the things i've been calling poetry it made me feel that what i write simply isn't enough i could do better the poem was about a woman and i felt whole and the words weren't for me, about me, but i felt whole in ways i can't explain and i'll never be able to but i thought to myself that this is poetry and this is what words are supposed to do they're supposed to make you feel things regardless of what and i kept wondering if my words have that effect i want people to yern, long, hope, survive off my words, devour them and i want my words to leave them longing and hoping for just a bit more and i read this poem not once, not twice, but three times, eating up the words like they were the last meal on earth and i felt whole
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NotALamb
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20/F/South African
May 17, 2016
May 17, 2016 at 2:33 AM UTC
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