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Existing in a haze Daydreams crowd her brain She surrendered and smiled Said, "I think I'll stay a while" As she stared into space And her mind began to race The belonging that she chased No longer did it evade When Alice, Alice, bleeding soul Fled into her rabbit hole Dreaming of a better world Broken, mad and all alone Alice, Alice, don't let go But Wonderland is her true home She needs it so she can cope Madder than a hatter, Alice Broke So now she sits alone She's lost track of time Gazing into the distance She exists within her mind Sometimes she comes back But joy she cannot find So in her mind she'll drown Falling deeper down, down, down Alice, Alice broken soul Lives inside her rabbit hole Seeking out a better world One where she'll never be alone And they cry, "Alice, don't let go!" But Wonderland is all she knows! Reality holds no more hope Madder than a hatter, Alice... Alice, Alice hopeless soul Held captive by her rabbit hole Her daydreams will not let her go Lost her mind so long ago Alice, Alice, now she knows Her Wonderland was all a hoax Now she's just a shadow Madder than a hatter, Alice Choked
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Jan 2, 2025
Jan 2, 2025 at 8:20 PM UTC
Darkness falls on Wonderland and Alice cries
Existing in a haze Daydreams crowd her brain She surrendered and smiled Said, "I think I'll stay a while" As she stared into space And her mind began to race The belonging that she chased No longer did it evade When Alice, Alice, bleeding soul Fled into her rabbit hole Dreaming of a better world Broken, mad and all alone Alice, Alice, don't let go But Wonderland is her true home She needs it so she can cope Madder than a hatter, Alice Broke So now she sits alone She's lost track of time Gazing into the distance She exists within her mind Sometimes she comes back But joy she cannot find So in her mind she'll drown Falling deeper down, down, down Alice, Alice broken soul Lives inside her rabbit hole Seeking out a better world One where she'll never be alone And they cry, "Alice, don't let go!" But Wonderland is all she knows! Reality holds no more hope Madder than a hatter, Alice... Alice, Alice hopeless soul Held captive by her rabbit hole Her daydreams will not let her go Lost her mind so long ago Alice, Alice, now she knows Her Wonderland was all a hoax Now she's just a shadow Madder than a hatter, Alice Choked
Personal, poetic rewrite of ALICE by Peggy
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Jan 2, 2025
Jan 2, 2025 at 8:20 PM UTC
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