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I guess this is me Open, inviting Face up, arms spread To the heavens The stars Only you, solid hunks of fire and ice Can pound out and alleviate my sins And lord, have I sinned Gave everything away for nothing in return A promise made to one who didn't deserve it A decision made that could never be undone Why by the cow when you can have the milk for free? Silly metaphors, silly questions For a pain so real and raw A surgery started but not completed A body left open, skin peeled away Vulnerable I can't help taking it all All your good, your bad Your moans, your cries, your sighs Do with me what you will I care too much to fight I am too soft Too sensitive, too open I'll be broken before I know it ... I fear I already am
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Apr 19, 2013
Apr 19, 2013 at 2:14 AM UTC
Only the Stars Will Know
I guess this is me Open, inviting Face up, arms spread To the heavens The stars Only you, solid hunks of fire and ice Can pound out and alleviate my sins And lord, have I sinned Gave everything away for nothing in return A promise made to one who didn't deserve it A decision made that could never be undone Why by the cow when you can have the milk for free? Silly metaphors, silly questions For a pain so real and raw A surgery started but not completed A body left open, skin peeled away Vulnerable I can't help taking it all All your good, your bad Your moans, your cries, your sighs Do with me what you will I care too much to fight I am too soft Too sensitive, too open I'll be broken before I know it ... I fear I already am
dreamingofnovember
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Apr 19, 2013
Apr 19, 2013 at 2:14 AM UTC
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