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he wallows in the slop,   seemingly unable to stop   alliteration is his biggest sin   grimly gripping grand and grotesque lines alike rhythm and rhyme are somewhere   deep in the heap of crap he cranks out   similes are his favorites but parsimonious as desert dew when he hunts for one that's new metaphors bounce beyond his reach, on harder ground   than the pen he shares with hogs doubtless the domain of dogs   far bigger than he
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Nov 30, 2015
Nov 30, 2015 at 9:20 PM UTC
missing muddy metaphors
he wallows in the slop,   seemingly unable to stop   alliteration is his biggest sin   grimly gripping grand and grotesque lines alike rhythm and rhyme are somewhere   deep in the heap of crap he cranks out   similes are his favorites but parsimonious as desert dew when he hunts for one that's new metaphors bounce beyond his reach, on harder ground   than the pen he shares with hogs doubtless the domain of dogs   far bigger than he
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Nov 30, 2015
Nov 30, 2015 at 9:20 PM UTC
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