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looking around this square room silently observing end to end corner to corner measuring the width the depth with my eyes of what i call 'my peaceful place' it looks like me smells like me but there is still something missing i can't put my finger on it but i can feel it in how the room echos slightly when i cough or sneeze it brings a coldness to it it doesn't feel exactly right what can i bring to this place of solitude that will warm it give it that womb-like feeling i want to feel hugged when i enter wrapped in the cozy warmth of comfortableness i've got some thinking to do...
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Mar 25, 2015
Mar 25, 2015 at 3:58 PM UTC
my place
looking around this square room silently observing end to end corner to corner measuring the width the depth with my eyes of what i call 'my peaceful place' it looks like me smells like me but there is still something missing i can't put my finger on it but i can feel it in how the room echos slightly when i cough or sneeze it brings a coldness to it it doesn't feel exactly right what can i bring to this place of solitude that will warm it give it that womb-like feeling i want to feel hugged when i enter wrapped in the cozy warmth of comfortableness i've got some thinking to do...
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Mar 25, 2015
Mar 25, 2015 at 3:58 PM UTC
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