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As i walked the shore at morning tide a shining pebble caught my eye the sun awakened the morning view i looked to see that sparkling gem was you
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Sep 27, 2014
Sep 27, 2014 at 12:26 PM UTC
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As i walked the shore at morning tide a shining pebble caught my eye the sun awakened the morning view i looked to see that sparkling gem was you
I didn't luke the finish and fixed it up but maybe ruined it? to wordy that's better i thinnk always keep word.count doun say more.wifh less
#much#better
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sadbanjo
Sep 27, 2014
Sep 27, 2014 at 12:26 PM UTC
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