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She dropped the" in-law" somewhere along the way: I was the daughter she never had. In her last illness we chatted over the phone, exchanged family news and celebrity gossip. One morning she asked if I felt better, urged me to walk with a stick if my legs still hurt, "now mind you do.." I promised I'd be careful, didn't bother to explain I'd had kidney cancer not achy legs. Details weren't important.I knew what she meant. A memory had escaped, freed us both to a warmer place before dementia locked the doors again,deep-froze the key.
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Jul 27, 2016
Jul 27, 2016 at 7:11 AM UTC
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She dropped the" in-law" somewhere along the way: I was the daughter she never had. In her last illness we chatted over the phone, exchanged family news and celebrity gossip. One morning she asked if I felt better, urged me to walk with a stick if my legs still hurt, "now mind you do.." I promised I'd be careful, didn't bother to explain I'd had kidney cancer not achy legs. Details weren't important.I knew what she meant. A memory had escaped, freed us both to a warmer place before dementia locked the doors again,deep-froze the key.
Another older, much-edited poem.
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Jul 27, 2016
Jul 27, 2016 at 7:11 AM UTC
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