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when news that you get isn't something that sings of peachy breezes and perfumed love you freeze in horror and let the cold wash over you i touched the surface of stilled water but you refused to stir even though the ripples marred your face and cut straight through your gaze i cried for you a wail inside my heart growing strong like the wind howling in a winter storm but the snow piled atop of you and weighed you down with a misery that shouldn't have been yours helplessness like solid lead along with trembling fingers fluttering like fragile hummingbirds when i realise that you, a pillar of support, have become as vulnerable as them not just for your sake but for everyone else please be ok
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 9:18 AM UTC
bad news
when news that you get isn't something that sings of peachy breezes and perfumed love you freeze in horror and let the cold wash over you i touched the surface of stilled water but you refused to stir even though the ripples marred your face and cut straight through your gaze i cried for you a wail inside my heart growing strong like the wind howling in a winter storm but the snow piled atop of you and weighed you down with a misery that shouldn't have been yours helplessness like solid lead along with trembling fingers fluttering like fragile hummingbirds when i realise that you, a pillar of support, have become as vulnerable as them not just for your sake but for everyone else please be ok
today, someone I've known for a long time was diagnosed with leukaemia.
krisoul
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 9:18 AM UTC
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