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do you remember when we went to the mountains? yeah, it was an awful trip, and nothing went right at the end, when it was over, do you remember? we were packing up our desert igloo to leave it all behind us you were coordinating our friends loading the truck it was so stressful, and everyone was tired and cranky the trip did not go how anyone wanted I was getting more and more frustrated and you could tell you came over and asked me what I needed this is where it gets good, do you remember? I looked up at you and I could not find the words I was so overwhelmed; I did not know what I needed so, you just hugged me it was exactly what I needed perfect, safe, home I looked up to thank you and then I saw you. for the first time in a while, I saw you. did you feel the change? do you remember?
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Oct 17, 2020
Oct 17, 2020 at 10:38 AM UTC
do not forget me- part 1
do you remember when we went to the mountains? yeah, it was an awful trip, and nothing went right at the end, when it was over, do you remember? we were packing up our desert igloo to leave it all behind us you were coordinating our friends loading the truck it was so stressful, and everyone was tired and cranky the trip did not go how anyone wanted I was getting more and more frustrated and you could tell you came over and asked me what I needed this is where it gets good, do you remember? I looked up at you and I could not find the words I was so overwhelmed; I did not know what I needed so, you just hugged me it was exactly what I needed perfect, safe, home I looked up to thank you and then I saw you. for the first time in a while, I saw you. did you feel the change? do you remember?
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Oct 17, 2020
Oct 17, 2020 at 10:38 AM UTC
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