You were 
My sigh of relief 
And now 
You’re gone 
And I’m sitting here 
Gasping for air

shypoetry

Breathe

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santino

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Chiri

Denniswillis

amanda-francis

emmackenzie

Hit me so damn hard. So many emotions and feelings drenching these lines. Thank you for sharing!!

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Mil57Man

Good One Shy. But, ain't it funny how things are not what they seem... Breath.

mary-anne-norton

This is lovely. Great poetic flow. Lot of depth."And I'm sitting here gasping for air"Thanks for sharing keep penning.

Deecamp11

angela-kirk

anne-curtin

Gaga_mind001

This is wonderful...but I believe you have more to say...your heart has a lot to offer...keep up the amazing work

rupam-mitra

kim-b

Mohan

We all realize the value when someone gone. Touching. tyfs

cody-austin-williams

How profound! With soo little said, soo much was conveyed!

S_Michaels

Simple but perfectly executed to cut deep

Leah_Ackeret

The most possibly simple poem describing true heartbreak. I love it.

hope-17

yukibliss

great work, I'm really touched about the poem keep it up!

gary-r-davis

Great work! Excellent poem!
I think this represents a part of life that nobody can get away from. I would love to see a poem from you on all the many good things in life.
You have talent!

connecthook

elizabeth-balise

Hold your breath. Count to 10. Then breathe as slowly as you can.  I'm here.

jenny-wilcox

TS_Poetry

glenn-currier

It is fascinating, this whole human thing of sighing. It signals a moment of peace and maybe even joy. But it passes all to quickly. Thanks Shy.

Rob-bigfoot

Damned good write and how true. ! Lost track of how many I have gasped for air!

trevor-m-landers

This seems to be a constant refrain from me, but this is a good opening stubb for a poem in my view. It needs extrapolation and embellishment...

spriha-kant

Yes , this is what someone feels when he or she loses his or her loved one. 
Beautifully expressed !

removed.-1l48

Sonukhusbu

The poet has expressed the pain poet is feeling for his loved one who is no more....he/she was so attached to the poet life that poet used to feel cared n secured in his arms... beautiful expressed &#128077;