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Captain George Elmore watches the trees and fields pass by as the car moves up the drive to his parent's house and his home, sky blue, birds in flight, the driver is silent and he is glad, no noise, no talk, nothing but silence. In his mind part of him is still at the Front, sights seen, sounds of guns, rifles, bombs, men's screams and moans, echoing in his ears, sights of dead and legs and arms and waste and heads and eyes. All is dead all dies, he murmurs, watching the house come into view, the windows, the roof, the doors. A servant girl walks by, head down thought held, not Polly, he muses, not her, he feels tears well in his eyes, all is dead all dies, he murmurs soft. The driver pulls up outside the front doors and there is a moment as if time has stopped, as if he is stuck, cannot move. Dudson's head is staring at him from the side of the trench, no body, just the head, eye open, one gone. The driver opens the car door and stands gazing in, Captain Elmore, home Sir, he says softly. The door of the house opens and his mother walks down towards the car, followed by the butler and a servant girl. His mother stands at the car door and stares in, George, are you all right? She says unsure why he sits so still, his eyes looking but unmoving, watery as if washed and undried. The butler stands behind the mother, gazes in hands by his sides, the servant girl stands behind him, looking by his side. George you are home now, his mother says. George stirs, eyes move about him, not focusing, he moves and steps out of the car and stares at the sky, all are dead, he murmurs, men die.
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Jan 26, 2016
Jan 26, 2016 at 3:44 PM UTC
ALL IS DEAD 1916.
Captain George Elmore watches the trees and fields pass by as the car moves up the drive to his parent's house and his home, sky blue, birds in flight, the driver is silent and he is glad, no noise, no talk, nothing but silence. In his mind part of him is still at the Front, sights seen, sounds of guns, rifles, bombs, men's screams and moans, echoing in his ears, sights of dead and legs and arms and waste and heads and eyes. All is dead all dies, he murmurs, watching the house come into view, the windows, the roof, the doors. A servant girl walks by, head down thought held, not Polly, he muses, not her, he feels tears well in his eyes, all is dead all dies, he murmurs soft. The driver pulls up outside the front doors and there is a moment as if time has stopped, as if he is stuck, cannot move. Dudson's head is staring at him from the side of the trench, no body, just the head, eye open, one gone. The driver opens the car door and stands gazing in, Captain Elmore, home Sir, he says softly. The door of the house opens and his mother walks down towards the car, followed by the butler and a servant girl. His mother stands at the car door and stares in, George, are you all right? She says unsure why he sits so still, his eyes looking but unmoving, watery as if washed and undried. The butler stands behind the mother, gazes in hands by his sides, the servant girl stands behind him, looking by his side. George you are home now, his mother says. George stirs, eyes move about him, not focusing, he moves and steps out of the car and stares at the sky, all are dead, he murmurs, men die.
A YOUNG OFFICER IS ON LEAVE FROM THE FRONT IN 1916 AND ARRIVES HOME.
TerryCollett
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Jan 26, 2016
Jan 26, 2016 at 3:44 PM UTC
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