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It feels like the sun warms only you Those black clouds slowly walk away Body tension disappears As you drown in the abyss of self-destruction Aromas turn pleasant Even the nauseous smoke Sour, cheap, acidic flavors Poking holes in your liver Like Zeus’s eagle Mind erases all right and wrong You’re enlightened like Siddhartha Beyond good and evil Sometimes when it feels just right You are alone The notes play only the music of your soul When it’s just right You don’t thrive It’s just enough You are enough
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May 19
May 19, 2026 at 7:08 AM UTC
Sometimes When It Feels Just Right
It feels like the sun warms only you Those black clouds slowly walk away Body tension disappears As you drown in the abyss of self-destruction Aromas turn pleasant Even the nauseous smoke Sour, cheap, acidic flavors Poking holes in your liver Like Zeus’s eagle Mind erases all right and wrong You’re enlightened like Siddhartha Beyond good and evil Sometimes when it feels just right You are alone The notes play only the music of your soul When it’s just right You don’t thrive It’s just enough You are enough
NORAYR
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23/M/Armenia
May 19
May 19, 2026 at 7:08 AM UTC
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