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Remind me to thank you, My love For when I opened my mouth To simply ask you For a bouquet of flowers You, my darling, gave me an entire field. Now, I lay in bed Alone Your side is cold and the living room reeks of alcohol. But I still feel your reminder. Your field of violets As they bloom across my body And I pretend they don't hurt me That you don't hurt me.
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Dec 2, 2025
Dec 2, 2025 at 2:11 AM UTC
Quiet With The Violet
Remind me to thank you, My love For when I opened my mouth To simply ask you For a bouquet of flowers You, my darling, gave me an entire field. Now, I lay in bed Alone Your side is cold and the living room reeks of alcohol. But I still feel your reminder. Your field of violets As they bloom across my body And I pretend they don't hurt me That you don't hurt me.
Before anyone asks anything, I promise I am alright. This was loosely based off of 'Ultraviolence' by Lana Del Rey. However, if you or someone you know are in a situation similar to the one described above, it is abuse and please reach out for help.
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15/On a date with Death
Dec 2, 2025
Dec 2, 2025 at 2:11 AM UTC
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