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She flashed her carmine smile at me, lips spread like two blooming crimson petals, beauty mark perched in a temptingly kissable spot, just above her immaculate lip line.   Her fang tooth flirtatiously turned inward & made her look as if always brewing intent to initiate adventure, certain to be pleasurable but prohibited, & most surely to provide ample opportunities to escape trouble after having taunted it. This minor imperfection served as a reminder that her beauty was still human, or else I'd have believed that she was the product of a profoundly, elaborate hallucination; that I had not yet woken from an impeccable dream. She roused me up from my stupor & seduced me into sojourns through the city blocks that lined our teeming, little hometown. We stood out as dreamers in a land full of people with their heads down like drones, working for their hive. She kept me feeling alive, & questioning the complacency of my surroundings in a muted, Midwestern mecca where you are taught to accept what you are told & swallow down bland traditions & institutions like cold oatmeal. She made me wish I was a boy so I could seize her by the perfect slopes of her statuesque cheekbones & paint my timid, **** lips with her carmine smile; but to play in her paint would be to stain harsh red across the flawless landscape of our very intimate understanding of one another. & so I long for Carmine.
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 12:23 PM UTC
Carmine
She flashed her carmine smile at me, lips spread like two blooming crimson petals, beauty mark perched in a temptingly kissable spot, just above her immaculate lip line.   Her fang tooth flirtatiously turned inward & made her look as if always brewing intent to initiate adventure, certain to be pleasurable but prohibited, & most surely to provide ample opportunities to escape trouble after having taunted it. This minor imperfection served as a reminder that her beauty was still human, or else I'd have believed that she was the product of a profoundly, elaborate hallucination; that I had not yet woken from an impeccable dream. She roused me up from my stupor & seduced me into sojourns through the city blocks that lined our teeming, little hometown. We stood out as dreamers in a land full of people with their heads down like drones, working for their hive. She kept me feeling alive, & questioning the complacency of my surroundings in a muted, Midwestern mecca where you are taught to accept what you are told & swallow down bland traditions & institutions like cold oatmeal. She made me wish I was a boy so I could seize her by the perfect slopes of her statuesque cheekbones & paint my timid, **** lips with her carmine smile; but to play in her paint would be to stain harsh red across the flawless landscape of our very intimate understanding of one another. & so I long for Carmine.
emma-leigh-ivy
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Aug 27, 2015
Aug 27, 2015 at 12:23 PM UTC
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