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Welcome to drown town A grey place that always holds me down With helping hands by the local clowns If it’s not them, it’s my mental health But enough about that, let’s explore around This god awful rundown town Do you see the lady breaking down? Crying for help, realising she has truly lost herself What about the boy riding the bike? Fourteen years old, feels naked without a knife How about the gang dressed in Nike? Whites, browns or E’s They have the vices you desperately need But between you and me I like getting ****** under a tree Alone with my thoughts about life Can’t really see myself living past 25 I scream to God about how much I want to survive But I am chained to my mistakes and that is no lie So enjoy your stay in my sweet hometown Sooner or later you’ll forget yourself   In my own personal hell, drown town
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Nov 27, 2019
Nov 27, 2019 at 10:37 AM UTC
Drown Town (Poem)
Welcome to drown town A grey place that always holds me down With helping hands by the local clowns If it’s not them, it’s my mental health But enough about that, let’s explore around This god awful rundown town Do you see the lady breaking down? Crying for help, realising she has truly lost herself What about the boy riding the bike? Fourteen years old, feels naked without a knife How about the gang dressed in Nike? Whites, browns or E’s They have the vices you desperately need But between you and me I like getting ****** under a tree Alone with my thoughts about life Can’t really see myself living past 25 I scream to God about how much I want to survive But I am chained to my mistakes and that is no lie So enjoy your stay in my sweet hometown Sooner or later you’ll forget yourself   In my own personal hell, drown town
Originally “Drown Town” is a song I did for a punk band. However in my wirter’s block I thought it be fun to take it apart and alter it Here’s the original “Drown Town” https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=U5IFV6EEfjw
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22/M/England
Nov 27, 2019
Nov 27, 2019 at 10:37 AM UTC
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